mega-project; fictional story I have made up

[kristoffer]

The story begins in 2120

It is a history about our solar system gets invaded by some aliens from Andromeda Galaxy, and we humans are forced to move out of the solar system. We getting help from a planet in Alpha Centauri. The humans and the race there, get's very well with eachother, until some aliens from Andromeda Galaxy coming and taking over the solar system(and Milky Way).


Maybe this story is kind of ridiculous, but they are invading Milky Way because, you know Milky Way and Andromeda Galaxy is going to collide about 3.5 billion years. MW and AG is going to melt with eachother and going to be a super-galaxy. The aliens from AG says they have more power than any other, and the aliens from Alpha Centauri has some friends in Ursa Minor Dwarf Galaxy, and they setting some teleportation communication around Earth to teleport it over to Ursa Minor Dwarf Galaxy, even the planet to the aliens from Alpha Centauri.


I'm not done with the story yet, but is it someone who want to say if it is a good one?


And note, teleportation is probably not available for humans in 2120, but the aliens from Alpha Centauri has came soo far into the technology, they are more intelligent than humans


Story starts in 2120, and Earth are being teleported in 2125

[Reiko]

A whole galaxy seems rather large for one species or even a group of species to conquer and hold.

[kristoffer]

A whole galaxy seems rather large for one species or even a group of species to conquer and hold.

Remember, this is just fictional

[Reiko]

A whole galaxy seems rather large for one species or even a group of species to conquer and hold.

Remember, this is just fictional

Oh I know that I was just trying to provide constructive criticism.
Invaders from the Andromeda galaxy was a theme of a TOS Star Trek episode. After a fist fight, Kirk kissing one of the invaders and Scotty getting another one drunk, the crew manages to save the day.

[PlutonianEmpire]

A whole galaxy seems rather large for one species or even a group of species to conquer and hold.

In high school, I wanted to build an Empire that literally spanned the whole Universe, starting with writing stories about it and then implementing it in Real Life.

How naive I was back then....

[kristoffer]

This story will be different. It will end in a galactic war between the Alpha Centauri people and the humans against the aliens from Andromeda Galaxy