Here's a couple more...
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Orbit the planet Tatooine and you will be amazed AS the realism of its arid deserts.
AS should probably be "at".
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For experienced programmers who have an interest, directions on how to locate and access Celestia’s source code on the web will be provided in Part 2 of this User’s Guide, now under development.
Why not provide a link to Celestia's Source Forge "Project" page? Folks want so many new things in Celestia, I think we should take every opportunity to get more programmers involved! I just added a similar sentence to the Scripting guide. The Celestia SF Project page is at
http://sourceforge.net/projects/celestia/.
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If you choose to download the entire library of over 200 Celestia add-on files designed to date by its many contributors, they can take up over 2.5 GB (megabytes) of disc space.
The word in parens should probably be GIGAbytes.
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“Links” (web addresses) to guide you to the additional add-on files available are listed on the web within the User’s forum and Celestia website.
Since you already know how to use the Word Ctrl-k function (text/URL) ... I think it would be a real nice idea to include actual links to some of the "listing" sites (like Seldens), and change the sentence just a bit to the following, where the bold, underlined characters would indicate a URL/web link:
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Links to many web sites that have Celestia add-on files available for download, are listed on the following web pages:
Celestia Add-ons,
Selden's List of Resources for Celestia, and in the
Celestia Forums, primarily the Textures and Add-ons forums.
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Since the user has already located and downloaded Celestia and the User's Guide, I don't think you need to tell them what a "link" is <smile>.
I added Selden's page because it is a well-maintained
list of most Celestia resource web pages/sites that Celestia users can visit. Versus adding any person's singular/specific add-on web page.
Here are the URLs for the highlighted text links, so you don't have to look them up:
* Celestia Add-ons web page:
http://www.shatters.net/celestia/extras.html
* Selden's List of Resources for Celestia:
http://www.lepp.cornell.edu/~seb/celestia/#2.2 (indexed to the Add-ons section)
* Celestia Forums:
http://ennui.shatters.net/forum/index.php
Gettin' kind of tired now, so I will do some more tomorrow.
Cheers,
-Don G.